In:L2 Collaborative Writing in Diverse Learning Contexts
Edited by Mimi Li and Meixiu Zhang
[Language Learning & Language Teaching 59] 2023
► pp. 109–129
Chapter 5Examining the role of peer collaborative feedback processing and
task repetition in task-based L2 writing
Published online: 17 August 2023
https://doi.org/10.1075/lllt.59.05abr
https://doi.org/10.1075/lllt.59.05abr
Grounded in research on task-based and
collaborative L2 writing, this quasi-experimental study examined the
impact of collaborative processing of instructor feedback during the
revision process. Forty-six intermediate learners of German in two
intact classes at a U.S. university completed two written summary
tasks, producing a draft and a revision for each, following feedback
from the instructor in-between. The two groups processed this
feedback individually and collaboratively, in a counterbalanced
design. All texts were analyzed for syntactic complexity, accuracy,
fluency, and lexical sophistication (i.e., lexical accuracy, choice,
richness). The results indicate that processing the instructor’s
feedback collaboratively with a peer primarily improved the lexical
domain, whereas the revision process itself led to improvements on
all linguistic features in diverse ways. The results offer
implications for research, methodology and pedagogy.
Article outline
- Introduction
- Review of relevant research
- Collaborative and task-based L2 writing
- Making the case for peer collaboration in processing instructor feedback
- Task complexity and L2 writing
- The present study
- Participants and instructional setting
- Operationalizing key concepts
- Procedures
- Data analyses
- Statistical analyses
- Results
- Research question 1: Collaboratively and individually processed feedback
- Research question 2: Task-repetition and collaborative versus individual feedback processing
- Discussion
- Research question 1: Collaboratively and individually processed feedback
- Research question 2: Task-repetition and collaborative versus individual feedback processing
- Conclusions
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